Oh God....
Every call of gratitute is less..
For what you have Given me!!
Every prayer falls short...
Even if..
I offer you tons of flowers..
Still...
I can not repay...
Oh God...
Thank you a lot..
You have blessed me...
With a treasure..
Precious than my life..
Which no wealth can measure!!
If for her one smile...
I can shed one tear..
That will be my greatest pleasure..
She is none other than
MY MOTHER....
14 comments:
It was thotful,more emotional dan poetic..nevertheless,try some other 'recipes' too..n yes,visit my blog "a gift of love" 4 a new poem.
wow Nit u did awesome job,,
i can say that in d part:
If for her one smile...
I can shed one tear..;;;
I can shed hundreds of tears might ve had more force only comment,, but nice on..XD
@anwesa...ya..the word mother itself is full of emotions...
@chinmay...thanx frnd n also thanx 4 ur worthy suggestion:)
its wonderful piece.really very emotional poem .good work keep it up
@supernova...thanx archie..bt u also keep on posting some more stuffs on ur blog 4 wch i m waiting 4..:)
lovely piece re
:)
very nice n emotional one!
well very nice post...really hard to express mother is few sentences..cozz she is whole content of words of feelings
@priya... thanx dearie-:)
@anonymous...i'll be pleased if u mention ur name...:-)..but thanx 4 ur comment friend!
@prajyot....thanx friend 4 peeping into my blog & expressing ur views..hope u visit my blog onwards also & leave ur comment..-:)
hii all...hope u all like my new post
hii all...hope u all like my new post
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