Sunday, September 7, 2008

LoSt DaYz..


When i was born...
My eyes were beaming with innocence..
Thenafter...
Time just rolled on...
My eyes ...now full of dreams...
Years after years passed by...
Now i am a youth..
Eyes...full of responsibilities..Staring blank with anticipation!!
Society attacked...
They forced me to change..I said.."i cant change"..its difficult!!
They said.."we will teach you"...
Really that was an easy task..
They just made me put on a mask..
my heart was covered with my face..My face was the mask!!!
I was wailing...feeling suffocated within...
Gradually...
i turned into a machine...
Coping up with hectic tasks...People made me work..
They made me laugh,cry,amused...
I was dancing on my toes at their hints...
The "I" factor was totally lost!!!I was one with the crowd....
Eyes...tired with the burdens..seemed lifeless..two balls of cold fire..
Still..time was on a journey!!!
Mirrors noticed my wrinkled skin...white hairs...pale eyes..
Still masked..
I suddenly woke up..
Golden days that I lost..LOOKED BACK!!
Saw a youth toiling for success..
I asked to myself..."where am I now?"
"Is it success"....NO!!
I cursed my fate...Now only...searched for peace..
put down the mask..
Blurred vision...weak body...Sat down...searched for my heart...
IT was still YOUNG...beating fast..mocking at me....
It said..."I'll die young"..."But you will die damn old...defeated"....!
...I glared aimlessly...

19 comments:

sudipti supriti said...

hey nits........
its really a nice n emotional 1...
try to attach some pictures or videos related to the topic....
it vil make it more attractive....
okkkkk
honey.........
best of luck

sudipti supriti said...

hey nits........
its really a nice n emotional 1...
try to attach some pictures or videos related to the topic....
it vil make it more attractive....
okkkkk
honey.........
best of luck

Santosh said...

Hmmm...Is it my frnd Nitijita...whom I met earlier? Really, frnd, the emotions, the vision and the feelings in each phrase that you kept, compel the reader to keep him/her as he/she has gone through such experience of life. Overall, I must say, the blog is simply superb. Thank you for making it and express it so beautifully. Really, the Caption u kept, is justified. God bless you.

ANWESA said...

hey nitijeta,
real gud start!dint kno u had a poet in u!

manoj said...

it is obviously very nice.........
i am not able to read everything...
......... after some day .......
i can give you the
comments..........
.......
ok byeeee

supernova said...

her every word gives a feeling of the truth prevailing in our world.very good thought.

NiTiJiTa said...

Thank u guys 4 leaving such precious comments!...m now really encouraged n looking 4ward 2 provide such more stocks in my blog..!!

Anonymous said...

Can't say anything yaar...
would just like to add that very bitter part of our life...and its true...we all have to face it..but really nice one..
keep posting best ones..
wish u success..

satyajit(chinku) said...

so u r a poetess..nice
& thanx for dat scrap..after along time..

soumya said...

Awesome lines ms. poetess....You have just made me rethink about life!!!
I want to be a child again.....

Pooja said...

b'ful!!!

waitin' 4 more...

NiTiJiTa said...

@pooja...thanx dear 4 leaving a comment..n i must mention..ur poems r also b'fl as well as xtraordinary!!

monalisa said...

hey dear this poetry piece took mr to another world.wat i found that its not a creamy or artificial one but a piece which spontaneously came 4m ur inner heart..its just grt yaar.plz don't stop riting like dis.

redtajocean@gmail.com said...

hey dear!....
Well Keep up de spirit...its just de beginnin of ur path..Cary on wid de rhytm u wil reach ur destination!......GUd de creativity is required n de potential in U can change de phase of game ina ny state !....keep Up!

NiTiJiTa said...

@mona....atlast u posted ur precious comment:)....keep posting!

NiTiJiTa said...

@gaurav...it would hv been better if u hv written ur name instead ur email id!....nywayz thank u 4 giving d comment...n dont ever stop commenting..okieyz?

DEEPAN said...

ur emotions in this poem has touched my heart. i am moved by ur poems dear. u r a g8 poetess.

NiTiJiTa said...

@deepan...thank u soooo much bro!!!

Anonymous said...

This is Nice.
You can be honest.. to yourself, always. the only thing you need to learn is, when, where and to whom you need to share out your true thoughts or emotions. That is what life will teach you, if you stick strictly to remain honest, despite all "society's efforts". :-)
And I have seen very honest people.. it is difficult to be like them, coz they are not liked by everyone.