Saturday, October 4, 2008

My mother...


Oh God....
Every call of gratitute is less..
For what you have Given me!!
Every prayer falls short...
Even if..
I offer you tons of flowers..
Still...
I can not repay...

Oh God...
Thank you a lot..
You have blessed me...
With a treasure..
Precious than my life..
Which no wealth can measure!!

If for her one smile...
I can shed one tear..
That will be my greatest pleasure..
She is none other than
MY MOTHER....

14 comments:

ANWESA said...

It was thotful,more emotional dan poetic..nevertheless,try some other 'recipes' too..n yes,visit my blog "a gift of love" 4 a new poem.

Chini said...

wow Nit u did awesome job,,

i can say that in d part:
If for her one smile...
I can shed one tear..;;;

I can shed hundreds of tears might ve had more force only comment,, but nice on..XD

NiTiJiTa said...

@anwesa...ya..the word mother itself is full of emotions...

NiTiJiTa said...

@chinmay...thanx frnd n also thanx 4 ur worthy suggestion:)

supernova said...

its wonderful piece.really very emotional poem .good work keep it up

NiTiJiTa said...

@supernova...thanx archie..bt u also keep on posting some more stuffs on ur blog 4 wch i m waiting 4..:)

Priya Joyce said...

lovely piece re
:)

Anonymous said...

very nice n emotional one!

prajyot said...

well very nice post...really hard to express mother is few sentences..cozz she is whole content of words of feelings

Nitijita said...

@priya... thanx dearie-:)

Nitijita said...

@anonymous...i'll be pleased if u mention ur name...:-)..but thanx 4 ur comment friend!

Nitijita said...

@prajyot....thanx friend 4 peeping into my blog & expressing ur views..hope u visit my blog onwards also & leave ur comment..-:)

Nitijita said...

hii all...hope u all like my new post

Nitijita said...

hii all...hope u all like my new post